2nd Draft of our FIlm

For the screening of the second draft,which was the  improved version of our title sequence, we received again another set of feedback from our class mates and our teacher in terms of what has been improved since the previous screening. This time we  received more  praise on things such as: the lead government man (Kaseem) pointing angrily at the CCTV board and, the re-shoot of our Rebels scene. When it came back to editing, Tyrell  actually found that our original Illuminati sequence that featured a focus pull with Jacob was still on my Apple Mac. He decided to add this version into our improved title sequence. Classmates felt as though the narrative was conveyed much clearer than previously and, that the re-shot version of our Rebels scene looked much more fitting compared to the original Rebel scene. However, some bad feedback that we had received was that people weren't too fond of our font choices and, felt as though the appearances of the text on screen was out of place. Also, some classmates felt as though our Rebels scene should be similar to The Scavengers scene in terms of also including a found footage, handheld camera filter. All feedback on that day has been taken into account and was to be added and improved to our official final version of our title sequence.


Here it is

Preparing for our Evaluation Pt2

For our evaluation, Tyrell, Danny and I have sat down within our own spare time in order to start preparing answers for the 7 evaluation questions. We made a variety of mind maps for 4 of the questions that we decided to answer. We brain stormed ideas for each of the questions that we chose. The 4 questions we chose was:
" What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing the product ? "
" Looking back to your preliminary task, what do you feel that you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product ? "
" What kind of media institution might distribute your media product and why ? "
 " How did you attract/address your audience ? "
After brainstorming our ideas for these 4 questions, we decided to present the answers for these 4 questions in particular through a fun interactive media technique which was to film it in front of a green screen. We decided to play our title sequence continuously on repeat through the duration of our answers. For the remaining 3 other questions, we decided we were going to experiment with other fun interactive techniques by using things such as: PowerPoint, Prezi and actually posting blogs on to Blogger. 

Feedback on first Rough Draft of the title sequence

Here the 1st draft of our Title Sequence